Friday, 15 December 2017

Audience Feedback ~ Second Draft

WWW

  • Good editing 
  • Cross cutting, at the beginning with the flashbacks to Rosewood's childhood
  • Split screen, guests waking up from being drugged 

EBI

  • Include more quick shots (1sec)
  • Add more dialogue towards the end
  • More sound effects 
  • More camera movement 
  • Add more emphasize to dinner scene
  • More flashbacks of the good moments 
  • Alter the 'who are you?' moment 
  • Film the drugging of the drink


Monday, 11 December 2017

Our Changes and Decisions Vlog (Part 1) ~ by Alice Nutter and Erin Surkitt

Our Changes and Decisions Vlog (Part 1)

Inter Titles and Connotations ~ by Alice Nutter

This is stereotypical convention of a trailer to have the directors names in it and we wanted to make our trailer as realistic as possible.


We chose the colour of our font to be red and white, this fit not only with the theme of thriller and the scary air it has about it, but also it homes in the Christmas theme. Though Christmas is seen as an innocent holiday it can easily be turned on its head to be made into the complete opposite. We chose to make the words "you" and "naughty" in our inter title to be red as it connotes that the audience watching it is in danger, therefore having the connotative effect of tension, adrenaline and suspense as well as a sense of paranoia and danger, which is what we want to inflict upon our audience considering our trailer is a psychological thriller. Leaving the audience questioning themselves, what is meant by the direct address of you. Then naughty is also coloured red as that's the colour you associate with being naughty connoting anger and danger.


Then we have the title of our film following the same theme as the other titles or captions as the word "naughty" is red. Also this is a stereotypical convention in a film trailer too and like with the directors name we wanted the trailer to be as realistic as possible.



Finally we have our release date. We chose our font to be a sans serif font as we wanted to connote how sinister our film trailer would be. Though our film trailer is not completely serious in its theme. Considering it does contain a Santa Clause as the main antagonist and our trailer is centered around the festive holiday of Christmas. This is why we ultimately chose to make our release date 'Christmas 2018' because then it will attract a a mass audience as everyone being in the spirit of Christmas and wanting a Christmas movie to watch. We were also cautious to make the date in 2018 because it would be unrealistic to have this year as that doesn't allow time for the audience to anticipate its release as well as creating an excitement and hype surrounding it, which will ultimatum draw the audience in to watch it.

Friday, 1 December 2017

Music and Sound Decisions with Reasons ~ by Erin Surkitt





The first piece of music which we decided on was Santa Claus is Coming to Town. We chose this song so it relates to our Christmas theme as well as our psychological thriller theme. The only way we could edit this song to make it sound more sinful and less cheerful was to reduce the tempo of the track whilst maintaining the pitch. To section up the trailer and to help blend the audio tracks together well we chose particular parts of the song, such as the ending when everything goes silent, the music then returns and plays "Santa Claus is coming to town" to then remind them of the subject matter.





We thought that by just having the Christmas music over the top of the trailer was too plain and we needed some suspenseful music over the top of the unpleasant moments. For example when one of the guests hands fall, it seemed quid morbid to have Christmas music playing still, therefore we added this track instead to emphasize how dramatic the moment is.







After using suspenseful music we felt that the music made the trailer seem slower an it needed more fast pace music over the top. But most of the music we found online didn't blend well with the Christmas music, as it gave a sudden change in the atmosphere. Therefore we chose this track of creepy doll music because it has a similar tempo and melody to traditional Christmas music.


During some moments in our thriller trailer the suspense was increasingly high, for example when the guest wake up, and when Alice's guests takes a sharp breath at the end. To emphasize these parts of the trailer we used dramatic sound effects of deep bass sounds, which really hits you when you watch it. this causes the audience to sympathize with the guest from that bad feeling.








Finally to add to the realism of the trailer to try to make it as real as possible for the audience causing them to actually fear Scarlett Rosewood we added the sound effect of a door knocker. which also creates enigma codes for 'who's at the door?'




Final draft - NAUGHTY LIST

FINAL DRAFT